#WIPjoy April 4 - Introduce Your MC With A Line
Do you think it's a fail if you have to introduce your MCs with more than one line each? You guys get an excerpt. I'll type it out for those who need it translated.
"There will be answers for your questions further in. You can be certain of it."
"Alright. It's hard for me, but I'll wait."
"Are you so impatient all the time?" [Kol's] voice was tinged with annoyance and disbelief. How could such a waif become Serafin? How would she even make it through the trials?
Ya'el nodded, her carefree nature completely showing in her beaming face.
Ripples Revisions Are Complete!
I'm so excited to report to you that the revisions for Ripples, my first novel are finally complete. The whole novel is available in its revised (though not yet professionally edited) state on Wattpad. I know some of you were waiting for this announcement before reading it. Now, I'd really like to know what you think. Please leave comments and votes on what you like and don't like and I'll do my best to answer each one. And if you really like it, share it! Thank you so much!
Melody Kittles writes fantasy fiction under the name Robin McElveen. She loves God, her family, the arts, a warm cup of coffee or tea, visiting friends, and collecting coffee & Pusheen items.
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